There is this very interesting song doing round these days – Chulein Aasman by Farhan Akhtar, Salim and Suleiman. This song is an initiative by Farhan Akhtar’s new social campaign – Men Against Rape and Discrimination (M.A.R.D.). Now I don’t know how successful and meaningful the initiative is, I am writing to tell Farhan is that the song is not very impactful. It looks like you have made this song in a hurry to put something out there in the web-space to make your presence felt and gain momentum for your campaign. When I listened to the song for the first time, without knowing that it was by Farhan, I thought it to be an over-zealous effort by some lesser-known singer to claim to fame. But that clearly isn’t the case.
Kudos to your intentions and effort! But I guess you can do much better than this.